tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post3441641203796355111..comments2023-06-05T22:06:46.431+10:00Comments on Pencil Thoughts: The Caramelized Worldmihir mulayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13336680178578601381noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post-55563573207210761252010-03-18T05:45:01.978+11:002010-03-18T05:45:01.978+11:00i like this one too!! the pic made me hungry thoug...i like this one too!! the pic made me hungry though ;) but in any case, keep writing!Sabahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11074272981358993564noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post-36545593507595987732009-10-19T04:45:27.108+11:002009-10-19T04:45:27.108+11:00hey nice poem...
very true..hey nice poem...<br />very true..Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11535088527754361816noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post-44562520374919274822009-10-18T18:08:23.394+11:002009-10-18T18:08:23.394+11:00Very Nice poem constructed with simple words "...Very Nice poem constructed with simple words "The caramelized world".<br />You have highlighted the Truth of this world!!Ashish Motenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post-29745968140727815482009-10-18T01:18:24.476+11:002009-10-18T01:18:24.476+11:00Good to see you write a poem after a long time. Th...Good to see you write a poem after a long time. The last one I read was "Blood in Stones". Btw, I deleted my earlier comment as I forgot to click on email follow-ups.<br /><br />The concept was well-woven and the snap fitted the bill (i find it hard to post a pic doing justice to my words but yours was perfect). I esp liked the way your paras end with a description of the main topic.<br /><br />I saw that your thoughts started climbing or rather digging deeper with the cold wars para. But it ended too early. I feel that this poem wants to say more. Let it be as dark as it wants.<br /><br />I found this piece very thought provoking. Good work. I couldn't help thinking about it and came up with these thoughts:<br /><br />My 0.02 $:<br /><br />Masqueraded faces, invisible hands,<br />Ulterior motives, transactional friends,<br />The cloying sweetness of the caramelized world.Saurabhhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09534658936683611453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6963763512942263858.post-3586160099967860882009-10-17T22:24:52.659+11:002009-10-17T22:24:52.659+11:00What a lovely concept and that too expressed in ve...What a lovely concept and that too expressed in very precise words. Mihir, you hit the bull's eye straightaway !!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com