You planted a sapling
Tender & Nascent
All set to gain roots
And eager to send out shoots
You thought it was
A task all complete
And waited for flowers to bloom
Alas! You didn't give it much room
To grip the soil
To anchor the roots
Being the soil, I always tried
To save the plant everytime it sighed
But I couldn't water it myself
For that I needed you
You hardly gave it a thought
And now the green fades away in drought
Save the little green
While some of it remains
Coz if you still can't find water
Maybe the soil won't be there later
5 comments:
Oh boy! i love the way ur mind comprehends things... ur mind has a mind of its own! Its fantastic..! Something i can relate to and something that everyone should. I think I should just let my imagination free.. like yours! Good work there!
Thanks Sabah, but this is not just a work of my imagination! You can say its an allegory, if you look it the way I do...
It's just I related the two situations! Thats it!
PS: I have submitted 3 of my poems on NDTV. I dunno if they will put it on their webspace..
beautiful..love the last 2 lines here ..
Nice flow of thought...
awesome poem dude! Heres a "Simon Cowells" Thumbs up!
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